"Trespasser: New Begginnings" review

tresman · Post by **tresman** » Wed Sep 24, 2003 3:04 am

This was the greatest fan story I have ever read, Sk8er! First of all, the descriptions were great. You described everything so well and accurately that I could easily picture every detail in my head. Second, the length of the story was perfect; not to long or to short. The plot development was also great. The story had an exposition, narrative hook, rising action, climax, falling action, and resolution, just like it should. I can't wait for the second story!!!

Rating: * * * * * (out of 5)

Post by **Sk8er** » Sat Sep 27, 2003 12:31 am

Wow, thanks tresman!

Glad you enjoyed it.

tresman · Post by **tresman** » Sat Sep 27, 2003 12:35 am

No problem. It is hard to find a good fan fic related to jurassic park these days.

I am working on my own trespasser fan fic right now. It probably won't be as good as yours, but it should be okay.