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I liked it, very well written, much better than most fan-written stories.

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Lovely set-up. Well written. It may just be my evolving sense of story-telling but to be honest, I feel it moves a bit *too* slowly. Details which distract from the bigger picture, and really from start to finish, there's not a whole lot going on, for all that is read. I suppose it could be a good opening chapter though. :)

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Yeah it would serve as opening chapter. I've already seen some stuff worth editing, but editing too much before you finish can be quite detrimental


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Sounds good, S.I., it's just too small a snippet of the story to elaborate further.


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Fair enough Rebel. I have maybe 3 or 4 times more than this, but that would have been a mess to read on the forum


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