This new forum is for posting links to videos, on YouTube and the like, which you have made - preferably videos you've uploaded AND put together, but if you were a part of the team who created the video and it was uploaded by someone else, that's cool too. Go ahead and post Trespasser videos in here if you want, but only if you recorded/edited it. This doesn't mean text slapped onto someone else's video, but pure ingame recordings of your own are fine. Videos can be any subject matter. Enjoy!
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->Tres2020 Starter Kit
"Well, as long as you're under there, you can check the breakers," Thorne said. ... "There's a box right behind the front bumper. Over on the left."
"I see it." [said Sarah]
...
"The box is in backward. Flip all the switches the other way. Are you dry?"
"No, Doc. I'm soaking wet, lying in the damn mud."
~Michael Crichton
"Well, as long as you're under there, you can check the breakers," Thorne said. ... "There's a box right behind the front bumper. Over on the left."
"I see it." [said Sarah]
...
"The box is in backward. Flip all the switches the other way. Are you dry?"
"No, Doc. I'm soaking wet, lying in the damn mud."
~Michael Crichton
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Re: aaaaand.. Action!
My Ozymandias reading:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DIjFHriTowA
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DIjFHriTowA
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Re: aaaaand.. Action!
Weell! First off, your voice is great, I think you probably can pull off this monologue, but I'm afraid it just didn't come through right, IMO, in this recording. I'm not quite sure the music fit, either. A noble attempt, but I might suggest both slowing down a bit (at least at certain points), and analyzing the poem so that you have a very personal understanding for its meaning. It sounded more like a high school recitation for a required class assignment. 

->Tres2020 Starter Kit
"Well, as long as you're under there, you can check the breakers," Thorne said. ... "There's a box right behind the front bumper. Over on the left."
"I see it." [said Sarah]
...
"The box is in backward. Flip all the switches the other way. Are you dry?"
"No, Doc. I'm soaking wet, lying in the damn mud."
~Michael Crichton
"Well, as long as you're under there, you can check the breakers," Thorne said. ... "There's a box right behind the front bumper. Over on the left."
"I see it." [said Sarah]
...
"The box is in backward. Flip all the switches the other way. Are you dry?"
"No, Doc. I'm soaking wet, lying in the damn mud."
~Michael Crichton
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Re: aaaaand.. Action!
xD I know its not the greatest but I did it waaayyy too many times. If I had a better microphone I might even do it again,but since most of the takes had a huge amount of noise in the background I prefer to at least wait. I also do have a habit of speaking too fast, and it may have made it seem like I don't really get the poem, but I do.
High School recitation
Yeah, our English teacher is pretty much obsessed with poetry, so I know how that goes. xD
About my voice, for some reason I completely disagree, but then again that's just me. xD
High School recitation

About my voice, for some reason I completely disagree, but then again that's just me. xD