"Trespasser: New Begginnings" review

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"Trespasser: New Begginnings" review

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This was the greatest fan story I have ever read, Sk8er! First of all, the descriptions were great. You described everything so well and accurately that I could easily picture every detail in my head. Second, the length of the story was perfect; not to long or to short. The plot development was also great. The story had an exposition, narrative hook, rising action, climax, falling action, and resolution, just like it should. I can't wait for the second story!!! :D

Rating: * * * * * (out of 5)
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Wow, thanks tresman! :D Glad you enjoyed it. :)
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Post by tresman »

No problem. It is hard to find a good fan fic related to jurassic park these days. :) :) :)
I am working on my own trespasser fan fic right now. It probably won't be as good as yours, but it should be okay.
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