Thanks for the review.
So I followed your suggestion, and made the tunnel have more passages. The red keycard is in the tunnels now, so you won't have to backtrack through the level. The green and blue keycard has been moved way closer to its key-reader. I've done some more work on the final area and what-not. Soon, the level will be complete, ready for playing.
Another announcement: does anyone want to do help edit this level? Like a joint-level creation? The first part of the level is finished: Keycards, end level triggers and that kind of thing, but I want to make the level so you have two paths. One path in which you search for the keycards, and the other path where you have to find an alternate path to the final area. This is so I can guarantee level-replay value.
As I said, the first path is done, but the second path needs completing. So if anyone wants to help create the second, alternate path, I'll upload the current level files and we can discuss on how to edit the second path!
EDIT: Here's the heavily updated level, wrapped in a .rar file. I've encountered a little problem with triggers though. In the hunters camp, I made a puzzle where you find the dead hunters' keys, you know: LaSalle P, Marden A.S., etc. It's like the unfinished Mayan artifact puzzle in JPDS~trails. Anyway, you get the key, go to the locked hunter's box, and an object enter trigger makes the top of the box open. Only problem is, when that particular trigger is fired, the game crashes. Maybe someone can look into that trigger in the level. The trigger's called "Trig_UseMardKey"
Anyway, here's the updated level, completed with an actual intActionType = 31!
http://www.mediafire.com/download/9f8i2 ... mp_v.3.rar
P.S. I did a complete .swp and .pid update to give the level a larger texture size, allowing me to put in more stuff to the level. Subsequently, new textures were added in by accident. "Mr Grumpy" now has the Tres Alpha rex texture, and the soda vending machine has its original Trespasser textures, rather than the JPDS Jurassic Park vending machine. Well, that's all for now. The level is still far from completion, but at least now you can beat it!